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Treasure of Alpheus Winterborn The Treasure of Alpheus Winterborn by John Bellairs
Publication: Harcourt (1978), Hardcover, 180 pages / ISBN 0152899367
Genre: Fiction, Mystery, Children’s
Rating: 2.5/5
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I won this book from Jenny at Jenny’s Books and it came in the mail last week! John Bellairs is one of my favorite authors– I love the Lewis Barnavelt series– and Brad Strickland, who became his ghostwriter after Mr. Bellairs died, isn’t so bad either. Unfortunately The Treasure of Alpheus Winterborn wasn’t as good as some of his other books. It’s not bad, but it’s just a little bit too 1970′s to be completely enjoyable.

Summary from Amazon:

Working on the few clues he has, Anthony Monday sets out to find a treasure that may or may not have been hidden by the town millionaire, Alpheus Winterborn, prior to his death, but the only way he will know is by completing a full search.

Such an awesome premise: treasure-hunting! And in a library! And yet it’s really not anything special. It seemed really dated; not so much because Mr. Bellairs had his characters wearing bellbottoms or anything, but more because it just felt like it was written in the 1970′s. The writing seems very typical of book from that time period, plus the slang was terribly distracting. “Gee” and “golly” everywhere. (Did anyone actually say that in the 1970′s? Or in any time period?)

However, by the time the villain shows up and things start moving forward, it does get a bit more interesting and I was able to look past the language. One of the scenes near the end was very exciting, actually, and the ending itself was a nice fit.

Actually, my favorite thing about the book was the illustrations by Judith Gwyn Brown sprinkled throughout. She did the cover on my edition, too, and it’s utterly beautiful. (Obviously mine’s a different cover than the one I used in this post.) Some more info about Ms. Brown.

I wouldn’t recommend reading this if you’ve never read John Bellairs before– at least not at first– but I suppose if you’re a Bellairs fan it’s not such a bad book to check out. And even though I didn’t particularly like it, I am super happy to have it in my collection.

Apparently this is the first book of a series, and the rest of the series has supernatural elements! So the next book might turn out to be better than this one. Hm. I’ll check it out and let you know!

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Feb 182009
 
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(This is a little different than my other eWednesday posts, but it’s still related to ebooks and so fits in. Kinda.)

A couple of week ago Christine at Finding Free eBooks posted some suggestions for authors self-publishing their ebook, including this one that’s currently on my mind:

Too many of these ebooks I’ve seen have plenty of spelling mistakes, punctuation, grammar mistakes. Sentences that don’t make sense or stop right in the middle. This type of problem. Go through your work and correct these things or have someone else do it for you.

You are trying to get readers to like your work, to want to read your next book. You are trying to convince publishers that your talent is worth taking a risk on. Putting this sloppy work out says to people that you don’t really care, so why should they?

YES PLEASE. It is just unacceptable that anyone would publish a book that wasn’t the best it could be (this includes professional publishers as well and indie/self ones). Even if it’s free, I don’t want to read a book that’s poorly edited!

I’m currently reading a free ebook I found via Christine’s blog, and while the writing and story are pretty good, the punctuation needs a lot of help. There’s missing periods, missing commas, missing question marks and it’s so distracting I can’t focus on the book. I’m only in the fourth chapter, but I’m not even sure I want to finish if it’s going to be that bad in the rest of the book.

Just because it’s free doesn’t mean it has to be of a lower quality than paid-for books, y’know? And just because it’s an ebook doesn’t mean that it, the person that wrote it, the person that made it, or the person that downloads it are any less important than a paper book’s people. Plus, with ebooks it’s way easier to correct typos (or whatever) than with paper books!

So, er, basically: anyone who writes/makes ebooks? Listen to Christine.

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